Conrad Rice

Hi there Lindsey. I'm Conrad. Well, I have to admit that for a start, this is a very good one. I can honestly say that if this was a novel ...

Hi there Random. I'm Conrad. So, I have to agree with the assessment of the person above me. This piece seems more like it would be better as a poem ...

Hi there, Jenthura. I'm Conrad. So, I didn't get too far in this and already I'm apprehensive. Why? One sentence did it for me. “What in Faulk was that, cap’n?” ...

Hi there Laurence. I'm Conrad. So, I'm looking at this, and trying to find a plot in it. I'm not having a lot of success. You don't give us a ...

Hi OverEasy! Wow. I really loved this poem. You've weaved a large amount of emotion into the words you crafted here, and it really shows. your flesh, becoming all but ...

Hi Kylan! Thought I'd drop in for a review today. What's this? You wrote a sci-fi type story? *reads* Very interesting, I have to say. Not quite the sci-fi I'm ...

Hi Calmal. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer for today. So, this does seem an awful lot like just a prologue. It sets up a history, details some ...

Hi blackbird. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be giving you a quick review today. So, I'm actually not seeing much in the way of problems here. You have a good ...

Hi there napalmerski. I'm Conrad Rice, and I thought I would stop by to give you a review over this. And now it looks like the Sirdash have forgotten the ...

Hi Rosey. I have to agree with June that I think this needs some adding onto. It feels, and looks, threadbare when compared to your other sketches. You have a ...

Hi Rosey. So, another one of your sketches. You should really think about doing more of these. I know they're not much in the way of plot or character development, ...

Hi Rosey. I have to say that I do like this piece. It is pleasing to read, painting a very good mental picture. You use your descriptive words effectively. I ...

Hi Rosey. Not a lot to say with this one. You use quite a bit of descriptive language, and you use it well. The mental picture you paint in our ...

Hi Rosey! This will be short, cause your story is rather short and I am not seeing a lot wrong with it. So. here we go. The only thing that ...

Hello squarened! I'm Conrad Rice, and I will be your reviewer for today. I have to say that I really like this story. A lot. Like, am in love with ...